I kinda feel like Luigi didn't really contribute to the flow of the movie. That and the humor, beyond Mario getting chased by a Bullet Bill could of been a bit more eventful.
On a more technical note, work on your smoothness in movement.
Good attempt! Please keep trying.
Yeah, I kinda felt Luigi didn't add anything as well.
It's pretty okay. It's just missing bells and whistles at this point. Also, the dodo could be animated a bit smoother. Overall, good show.
Thanks a lot man.I agree with the dodo point but what do u mean by bells and whitles?
I'm gonna be honest here. Most of the stuff you release is the same stuff. This is showing something in terms of improvement, but your weakest point, I feel, is that most of this could use some serious work in terms of fluid animation. I don't really understand the humor either.
I like the idea you have going on with the compilation of random scenes. You just need to work on polishing and adding detail a lot.
I feel like you have a lot of potential here. Please keep trying.
I did like the ending. The burning sounds didn't exactly feel like they matched up with a toaster toasting toast, but other than that, good job!
This is absolutely amazing. Please make more :D
Not a bad start. The animation could be more fluid in some areas. Microphone sounds was a little fuzzy. Could of been a little longer.
Other than that, great beginning animation.
It's an okay intro, but this doesn't feel complete. Good job so far, though.
I'll give ya what I did because it seems like you put legit work into this. But the animation is cheesy and the audio work is very scratchy and too loud in some spots.
well!!!yeah!!!sorry about that.really!!!
but how did you like my episode
Good job on the animation style and sticking with pixelated imagery. You should make more :D
Good job! The faces could of been more animated, though.
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